Reducing Our Ecological Footprint

SHORT ESSAY ASSESSMENT

 

Excellent

(18-20)

Good

(16-17)

Fair

(12-15)

Needs Improvement

(11> X)

TOTAL

100

Essay Question 1

(1st Paragraph)

-Answer reflects in-depth analysis and is insightful

-issues addressed were highly significant

-paragraph is well-composed, well-written & free of spelling mistakes (contains topic sentence, body and concluding sentence).

 

 

-Answer reflects solid understanding of the issue

-general issues pertaining to the question were addressed

-paragraph is well-written though it could use some refinement

-Answer reflects a very basic grasp of the issue

-some of the major issues addressed, though some key points may have been over looked (more detail required)

-paragraph is coherent, though clarity needed

-research is not referenced

-spelling mistakes present

 

-Answer reflects confusion

-student did not address key issues

-paragraph lacks clarity

-research is not referenced

-spelling mistakes present

    

   

      /20

Essay Question 2

(2nd Paragraph)

-Answer reflects in-depth analysis and is insightful

-issues addressed were highly significant

-paragraph is well-composed, well-written & free of spelling mistakes (contains topic sentence, body and concluding sentence).

 

 

-Answer reflects solid understanding of the issue

-general issues pertaining to the question were addressed

-paragraph is well-written though it could use some refinement

-Answer reflects a very basic grasp of the issue

-some of the major issues addressed, though some key points may have been over looked (more detail required)

-paragraph is coherent, though clarity needed

-research is not referenced

-spelling mistakes present

 

-Answer reflects confusion

-student did not address key issues

-paragraph lacks clarity

-research is not referenced

-spelling mistakes present

    

   

      /20

Final Paragraph

(Relating to activity)

-Summary provides in-depth analysis and is related back to topic questions in insightful ways

-Student offers their own insightful conclusions

-paragraph is well-composed, well-written & free of spelling mistakes (contains topic sentence, body and concluding sentence).

 

 

-Summary reflects a good understanding of the topic and relates to topic questions.

-paragraph is well-written though it could use some refinement

-Summary reflects a basic, general understanding of the relevance of their field research.

-Student missed some opportunities to relate their field research to their topic questions in obvious ways.

-paragraph is coherent, though clarity needed

-research is not referenced

-spelling mistakes present

 

-Summary is somewhat confusing at times

-summary frequently does not relate to back to topic questions in obvious situations where it should have.

Answer reflects confusion

-paragraph lacks clarity

-research is not referenced

-spelling mistakes present

    

   

      /20

Data Representation / Analysis

-Raw data was gathered on a very-well conceived table that enabled student to record highly relevant statistics

-Table of statistics OR graph OR descriptive table included with the essay (copy/pasted from excel) enhances concepts addressed within the essay

-raw data was gathered using a table that enabled the student to gather relevant statistics

-Table of statistics OR graph OR descriptive table included with the essay (copy/pasted from excel) is consistent with the topic at hand

-raw data was recorded though the statistics not as relevant as they could have been

-Table of statistics OR graph OR descriptive table included with the essay though it is not conceptually clear or lacks some relevance

-raw data lacked depth and was poorly recorded in a non-structured manner (no well-conceived recording sheet used)

-Table of statistics OR graph OR descriptive not provided OR the data lacks meaning

        

      /20

Research / References

Three scholarly references cited (relating to paragraph work)

Two scholarly references cited (relating to paragraph work)

One scholarly reference cited (relating to paragraph work)

-No references provided or references were not relevant or scholarly

      /20

FINAL GRADE

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